Young people are committing more crimes. Discuss the causes and solutions for this problem.
These days, the rate of juvenile delinquency is getting higher than ever before. Being rooted in various reasons, this problem may be tackled thanks to many effective remedies suggested in the following essay.
To commence with, there is a wide range of causes why youngsters are committing more crimes nowadays. Firstly, due to their living conditions in some inner cities, some children are subjected to many hazardous criminals, therefore their behavior and their demeanor will no longer be affected detrimentally, and they will tend to offend at a very early age. Secondly, in some countries, children who are under 18 do not have to shoulder responsibility by themselves and normally receive a more lenient sentence for the same crimes. Thus, they will probably not be aware of the seriousness of their actions, and the rate of young offenders will increase significantly.
Owing to this serious tendency, there should be some effective methods to alleviate the number of juveniles committing offenses. Specifically, parents had better take care of their offspring more, as well as the government should launch a campaign to raise youngsters' awareness, also effectively propagandize them. Furthermore, national authorities should regulate the laws more appropriately, and treat children, who are under 18 equally as adults. So that, they will easily deter children from committing such a serious offense, and juveniles have to be responsible for all things they do.
To conclude, this trend can be caused by many aforementioned reasons and some useful measures should be taken into consideration by governments and parents, to mitigate the high rate of young offenders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...y, and treat children, who are under 18 equally as adults. So that, they will easily deter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40458015267 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00243670829 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8013208827 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170261336945 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677810160583 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587458504529 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963769240101 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210165455704 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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