A glance at the supplied line graph demonstrates how many people having car ownership in the u
Unated Kingdom over 30 consecutive you period starting from 1985.
Overall, as can be apprentice seen that there was an upward trend in the percentage of citizens who owners 3 cars, 2 cars and 1 car while the figure of people having no car was fall significantly during the period shown. In addition, the people owners a car is the most popular throughout the year in question.
In 1975, the percentage of people having 3 and 2 cars was a small faction roughly 4% and 6% respectively, while the owners of having 1 car and no car took up a significantly majority approximately 44% and 45%. Turning to the next year period, the figure of the citizens who possess 3 cars climbed slightly and keep the level stable for the next 10 years before rising gradually 9% in 2005.
Moving on, the proportion of people onwer 2 cars grown rapidly bt 8% in 1985, then remained stable until 1995 and finally move upward to 18% in 1995, with the figure of people who owner no car decline dramatically to 25% then fall gradually to 22% at the end of the period. The percentage of citizens having 1 car, whereas, fall rapidly in 1985 before increasing suddenly back to the original level throughout the rest of the period.
- The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005 percentage 67
- The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005 percentage 61
- The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecutive you period starting from 1985. Overall, as can be apprentice seen ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...lar throughout the year in question. In 1975, the percentage of people having...
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Line 6, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... faction roughly 4% and 6% respectively, while the owners of having 1 car and no ...
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Line 6, column 165, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('significantly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('majority') instead of another adjective.
...ners of having 1 car and no car took up a significantly majority approximately 44% and 45%. Turning to t...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...rs before rising gradually 9% in 2005. Moving on, the proportion of peopl...
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Line 8, column 183, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a owner'.
Suggestion: who is a owner
... 18% in 1995, with the figure of people who owner no car decline dramatically to 25% then...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59829059829 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65554881587 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542735042735 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5799993144 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.714285714 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4285714286 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164899389801 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857306557904 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362150883592 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954615254397 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355442653512 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.36 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecutive you period starting from 1985. Overall, as can be apprentice seen ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lar throughout the year in question. In 1975, the percentage of people having...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... faction roughly 4% and 6% respectively, while the owners of having 1 car and no ...
^^
Line 6, column 165, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('significantly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('majority') instead of another adjective.
...ners of having 1 car and no car took up a significantly majority approximately 44% and 45%. Turning to t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rs before rising gradually 9% in 2005. Moving on, the proportion of peopl...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 183, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a owner'.
Suggestion: who is a owner
... 18% in 1995, with the figure of people who owner no car decline dramatically to 25% then...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59829059829 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65554881587 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542735042735 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5799993144 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.714285714 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4285714286 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164899389801 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857306557904 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362150883592 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954615254397 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355442653512 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.36 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.