The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Leaders are responsible for the people. A leader takes care of those under him, guides them and does the best for them. The prompt suggests that the best way to prepare the young generation for leadership in any field is to incorporate in them a sense of cooperation rather than competition. I agree with the prompt for three reasons.
A leader is responsible for carrying all its people. Any mistake made by those under him should be taken care of by him. The leader is responsible for bringing out the best in the people. If the leader has a sense of competition instilled in him, he might feel a sense of superiority, inhibiting the growth of others. For instance, a CEO of a company does not let his employees present their ideas and suggestion, which in some cases are better than his, due to the fear of competition and feeling a sense of inferiority. This shows us that in many cases compeition might bring forth the fear of inferiority in people. Instilling cooperation in leaders will help them take others forward along with him.
Compeition can often cause you to become apathetic. A person who is very competitive might cross all limits to achieve his goal. Leaders should be considerate and care for their employees. Take for example, a small business of five people, has a deadline for monday to present a tender. Four of its employees are sick due to covid and ask for a leave. Due to the sense of competition and fear that their competition might present a better tender, the leader forces his employees to work. A lot of times competition might lead people to lack compassion. With a sense of cooperation, the leader would have worked along with the employee to present a tender.
Competition can also lead the leader to focus on only one aspect of the issue and only do what he thinks is correct. Cooperation involves listening to others advice and working with them to create a better impact. For instance, the government wants to introduce a new law. The sense of competion might cause the Prime Minister to pass a law which is not favorable for the people, just for the sake of competiton from the opposition. If the Prime Minsiter was cooperative, he would have worked witht he opposition to keep in mind their issues, along with the people of his party to pass a law that is best for the people. Cooperation is beneficial for welfare of people under a leader.
However, in some cases competition is also important, it might help bring out the best in the leader. Altough, this is not the case for all leaders. It is important to instill a sense of cooperation rather than competition in the young generation to make them good leaders in any field.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
...ple under a leader. However, in some cases competition is also important, it might...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in many cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 473.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67653276956 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68153962592 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427061310782 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 690.3 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3771377755 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8928571429 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.03571428571 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319345697764 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964861605944 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601401684506 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203286869319 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557978465638 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
...ple under a leader. However, in some cases competition is also important, it might...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in many cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 473.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67653276956 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68153962592 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427061310782 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 690.3 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3771377755 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8928571429 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.03571428571 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319345697764 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964861605944 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601401684506 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203286869319 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557978465638 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.