The diagram describes the reproduction of the honey bee.
Overall, there are various stages involved in the cyclical process of a honey bee, from females laying a couple of eggs every 3 days to their eggs developing as mature ones.
At the beginning of the process, female bees often produce one or two eggs throughout 3 days after mating for life. Therefore, each honey bee begins its life as an egg with the hatching process taking place at least 9 days. It also takes eggs a half of a week to crack and a newborn bee, which is commonly called a nymph, will emerge from it.
The process continues with nymphs growing, which generally lasts 21 days during the period. At that time, nymphs shed their outer layer three times 2 days apart and their sizes are gradually increasing day by day. The second molting time occurs in a week when the first time a newborn hatched. Next, nymphs undergo the final molting in the following 2 days, which is noticed as the last cycle of nymphs because after that, they take a metamorphosis stage and form themselves into young adult ones, having sizes far bigger than those of nymphs. To grow their full lengths and weights, maturing ones have to spend 4 days of their life. Finally, the cycle begins again when those female adult honey bees mate and lay eggs.
- Task 2 The availability of entertainment such as video games on handheld devices are harmful to individual and to the society they live in To what extent do you agree and disagree 32
- As major cities in the world are growing today so do their problems What are problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth How problems might be solved 89
- Some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea while others disagree strongly Consider both sides of this debate and present your own opinion 89
- Some people say that traffic accidents are caused by the increasing number of motorbikes Others blame for man s fault Which point of view do you agree 73
- Students learn far more with their teachers than other sources Internet or television To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62068965517 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22117886558 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 106.607317073 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7476335808 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4545454545 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220132699287 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103534403796 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111007667648 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188265863021 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115621996864 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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