Nowadays, the world is intricate, developed, and competitive, so we need technology that keeps up with these situations and provides us with new opportunities, and I call it the internet. I entirely agree with this statement, and I have several reasons why I feel this way that I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, by shining the internet in the world, the definition of connectedness was wholly changed, and the meaning of conveying information was turned into a new meaning also, the interconnected world was constructed, and the separate world became an integrated world called the universal village. Therefore the member of the public has more relationships as a united structure, and each and everyone can have an effective connection with other parts plus, this extensive relation provides opportunities to convey cultures and values between the world that reduce contrasts. My personal example is one of the compelling examples of this. Thanks to internet development, I have several friends around the world, from Brazil to China, and we always share our culture, foods, religious beliefs, and family values together and speak about them.
Secondly, the internet help persons to have an effective and prosperous business, and selling products become easy and convenient. There are a million businesses that give economic lucrative from the internet worldwide. They can gain money from youtube, Instagram, and other applications like this. For instance, one of my friends has used Youtube, and she is a successful Youtuber; as a result, she gains tremendous economic benefits.
Another noteworthy point is that the internet assigns a chance for remote work, which I am guessing is the most novel advantage of the internet. The internet gives anyone this chance to do their work without spending time at the office, so not only has it yielded economic gains for offices and companies and decreased their cost, but it also gives more free time due to reduces coming and going time. Also, these days several exams are accomplished as a remote exams, and everyone can contribute to that at home. For example, ETS recently added the TOEFL home edition. In my opinion, it is the best way for students to spend their exams in a home situation far from chaotic environments.
In a nutshell, by considering all points that were mentioned, I completely agree with this statement that the internet has numerous advantages in our lives, from the interconnected world to economic booms and remote work or exams. As a consequence, we may call the internet an astounding invention in recent decades.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ted world called the universal village. Therefore the member of the public has more relat...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... values together and speak about them. Secondly, the internet help persons to h...
^^^
Line 6, column 464, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'exam'?
Suggestion: exam
...eral exams are accomplished as a remote exams, and everyone can contribute to that at...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation far from chaotic environments. In a nutshell, by considering all points...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16705882353 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88846890154 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555294117647 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 13.0 1.86738351254 696% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4734689527 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.176470588 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172861006943 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492791185201 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394711182837 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986507748956 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365432606445 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 10.002688172 205% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ted world called the universal village. Therefore the member of the public has more relat...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... values together and speak about them. Secondly, the internet help persons to h...
^^^
Line 6, column 464, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'exam'?
Suggestion: exam
...eral exams are accomplished as a remote exams, and everyone can contribute to that at...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation far from chaotic environments. In a nutshell, by considering all points...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16705882353 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88846890154 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555294117647 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 13.0 1.86738351254 696% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4734689527 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.176470588 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172861006943 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492791185201 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394711182837 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986507748956 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365432606445 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 10.002688172 205% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.