Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In todays' society many activities are done using internet services including keeping. The use of internet is to the extent that living a comfortable life without the use of internet seems impossible. In my view, the government should offer internet access to all citizens without a cost. I will discuss my reasons in the following essay.
First, many people have different problems in monitoring the health and well being of family and loved one especialy people of very young or old ages, and this leads to high stress. A free of stress society can be a better place for the advancement of the country. The technology is advancing each day and there are many innovations in the smart devices field, this includes devices contributing to healthcare and monitoring. However most of such devices use internet accesss to alert family or healthcare spcialists for help. Hence, internet access is a crucial service needed for such services, having government provided free access to internet allows the citizens to ensure the safty of their children and other loved ones. For example, when a child is monitored using a smart device the parents can check up on the situation from time to time, this helps them relax knowing nothing is wrong and if something were to happen there would be alerted leading them to make the necessary actions to help their child.
Second, currently countless jobs can be done remotely leading to less trafic and time consumption for travel to the office. offering free internet services allows people to work from the safety of their homes and citizens that have trouble working outside due to health risks and other complications to have a beneficial role in society. By offering free internet services these people can get hired for different jobs leading to their independency and the burden on the government paying for expenses of people with no jobs wold lessen. For example, a friend of mine couldn't leave the house due to a sickness and by using internet now has a job helping her with her expenses.
Based on the above reasons I believe the government should provide free internet access.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 426, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...tributing to healthcare and monitoring. However most of such devices use internet acces...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Offering
...e consumption for travel to the office. offering free internet services allows people to...
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Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'jobs'' or 'job's'?
Suggestion: jobs'; job's
...t paying for expenses of people with no jobs wold lessen. For example, a friend of m...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...d lessen. For example, a friend of mine couldnt leave the house due to a sickness and b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, well, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95238095238 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55445905914 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532212885154 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5091637726 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.866666667 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293621735571 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116185368865 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110243506216 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222304926662 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773138385526 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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