People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
For me, I personally believe that it is always good to travel in my country over traveling in foreign lands. I feel this way for several reasons, which I shall explore in the following paragraph.
To begin with, the best way to prove loyalty to our country is by traveling within our country and imbibing the feeling of nationalism. My country India is a country that is secular, have diverse ethnic groups and is the largest democracy of the world. There are so many tourist places to travel in India, which makes me feel extremely patriotic. My personal example is a compelling illustration of this. The last time when I traveled to New Delhi, I was trilled to see the buildings such as Red Fort, Taj-Mahal, Rasthrapathi Bhavan and many more. It reminded me of the glory of Indian heritage and its global influences across the world. If I did travel to any other country, i wouldn't feel so connected and self fulfilling as the travel within my country.
Secondly, I pledge loyalty to my country, when I spend the traveling expenses within my country. It is one of the ways I can help my nation. Moreover, i can know my country better by visiting the eloquent temples in the southern India, the Ganges and the Himalayas of the north, the icy caps of the north east and the desert of the west. Visiting these places make me so nostalgic in a way, I would never feel if it was done on some alien nation. For instance, the simple journey to even a place called Goa needs 30000 rupees in order to see all the wonderfully built churches of the Dutch, and the amazing beaches with the water sports in it. When I spend this money, it directly goes to the people of my country, and hence, i am preventing trade deficit that can incur if I spend the money in any other country besides India. If I happen to spend the money in Dubai for instance, Dubai shall be benefited by my spending and i wouldn't want that to happen.
All in all, in order to prove my loyalty to my country, i must travel within its boundaries and cherish the beauty, besides feeling patriotic. Moreover, it helps me to know my country better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47792207792 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49347402576 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2320271096 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3888888889 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166286889078 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060098742658 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584158929809 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121408127994 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548121528749 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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