Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people argue that there are huge benefit from traveling to own home land because it's affordable, easy to travel, ecofriendly, helps to learn more own country's heritage and history. However, in my opinion, I believe that traveling to foreign land for more advantages for following two reasons.
First of all, traveling to foreign countries help to gain new skills. We can learn about cultures, history, economics situations and even more about yourself. For instance, every year more and more tourists travel the world with objective of learning new language. Moreover, we see lots of visitors eager to take wildlife safaris in Africa with main purpose to expand their photography skills and getting some more practical training. It is essential to learn new skills because it enhances our ability think critically and smoothly. Thus, travel to exotic land helps to develop new skills.
Secondly, by traveling to exotic destinations one can take out of comfort zone and boost confidence. For example, one can exposed to daily challenges, new languages, understanding how people in others ends of the world operate, how to get taxi or take a bus in a place different to your own, how to eat with chopsticks, how to ask for directions and how to identify if you should trust those directions and comments and make sure you are not going to be victims of scam, and by overcoming from these challenges, while traveling will help to boost people confidence. In contrast, traveling to own country is so easy that it make people more dependent and lower their confidence when come across to new things in life. It is pivotal to boost confidence because it helps to deal with new tough situations in day to day life. That's why traveling to other parts of world enhances the confidence.
To sum up, the issue of whether people beneficial from traveling in their own native country or not is complex. Some have suggested that traveling to own mother land is better because it 's cheap, easy to travel, can learn own indigenous heritage, reduce carbon emission. Nevertheless, I still contend that traveling to foreign land has numerous benefits because it helps to widen new skills and enhances self-esteem and confidence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01081081081 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70925691768 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518918918919 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.228317235 48.9658058833 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.875 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.45110844103 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313943254234 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113879619638 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832752470788 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22228945903 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569949659661 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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