The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
The diagrams illustrate the existing plan of a university’s sports centre and and the proposed plan following the building.
Overall, this sports centre is likely to undergo some significant changes. The most striking changes are the development of the two outdoor courts and the addition of various sports facilities.
At present, this centre has a large building in the middle and two outdoor courts to the west and east. Inside the building, there is a reception facing the main entrance, a 25-metre swimming pool behind the reception and a gym at the back. People can access the seating area by the door on the right of the reception desk, while the door on the left leads to the changing room.
According to the second map, the two outdoor courts will be merged with the main building. On the original site of the western outdoor courts, a large leisure pool will be constructed, while a big sports hall and two studios for dancing will be built on the site of the other outdoor courts. There will also be two additional changing rooms, a new café and a sports shop on on either side of the main entrance. The gym is planned to double in size, while the remaining features will stay unchanged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: and
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Suggestion: double
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73933649289 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52168333013 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511848341232 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163861200481 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729555640634 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671686218634 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12097697736 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814164758452 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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