Some people think that only the society should be blamed for any anti-social activities. What are the causes of these activities? Who is responsible for them?
In this contemporary era, a strata of populace opine that the community ought to be solely accused for unacceptable doings around. This essay will expantiated on the factors responsible for unwanted societal activities as well as those responsible for them.
To begin, perhaps the foremost cause of anti-social doings may be attributed to poor upbringing during childhood. This means that youngsters were not taught ideal community norms and values. Also, it might be that children were not reprimanded whenever they do something wrong. To exemplify, a long-term wanted notorious armed robber in an Africa country was caught during the 1980's. During the interrogations, it was discovered that his mother had always indulge his bad attitudes such as stealing while growing up. Another point to note is that it could be due to negative peer group influence. This is because young adult may immitate bad characters from acquitances. As a result, engaging in an uncultured activities at the earliest age such as clubbing.
Moving on to the person that might be held responsible derogatory act, it may be said that parents or guardian should be hold accountable due to the fact that they are present at the primitive stage of younger ones. So therefore, it is their duty to imbibe well cultured mannerism into them as well as guide them so as not to go astray from the wright part of life. In addition, government could also be blamed . The reason could be due to lack of monitoring, follow-up of set rules and regulations and it's strict adherence. Furthermore, by not priorotizing cultural values. For instance, not making it a core course in primary and tertiary institution.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the factors responsible for unwelcomed societal doings and who is responsible for them. The former may be resulting from inappropriate raising at a tender age and bad age-group influence. The latter might blamed on parents and the law makers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: indulged
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'activity'?
Suggestion: activity
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Suggestion: held
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Suggestion: So; Therefore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.134375 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93130360646 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2350682645 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4736842105 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250113465481 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664563223612 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749169381261 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163286215834 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600414987791 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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