The education of young people is the most important task in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is argued by many that educating the youth is the most important task in many countries, whereas the education of adults who have the urge to study is also critical and they should spend more on this in a similar way. I completely agree with this point of view and the reason for this will be discussed as follows:
The first reason why I agree is that I believe it is the responsibility of any government to support education for any age because learning plays an important role in a person’s life. It is a fact that learning is not the only way to success but is the shortest way to bring a better life to anyone. For young people, when they grow up, with the knowledge they have gained, they can choose their favorite career with an attractive salary and make their life beneficial to themselves and society. When it comes to older people, the motivation for study may be different. For some people, it may be for their career upgradation, while for others, it may be because of their interest in the subject. However, with any purpose, it still helps people become more successful. "
Another rationale behind my belief is that adults are extremely serious about their studies. They were mature and had many experiences to awaken to the opportunities that education could bring to their lives. In my opinion, the tax-payer’s money was not wasted on educating adults.
In conclusion, I completely agree that education is an invaluable asset which can bring success at any age, so adults should be supported by the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, whereas, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74444444444 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67213687911 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9031064213 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.454545455 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195572578413 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753910810148 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855731417369 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142319349075 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925752447929 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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