It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The world is constantly changing in both human careers and human lives. As a result, people have to learn how to adapt to the adjustments, such as taking risks. Some people, however, consider it not wholly advantageous. This essay will look at both sides of this issue.
First, taking risks can lead to success in both professional and personal life. Because our world has numerous people with qualifications and skills, we may never have what we want if we are not bold enough to take a chance when it comes to ourselves. For example, when you are a senior in high school, you may want to apply to a privileged university. This may require a high score on the entrance exam. Even if you are good at studying, there is a negative chance that you may not do the exam as well as you had expected. However, you just might be able to figure out the outcome if you take that exam. In addition, if you are an employee, you have worked hard for a long time to prove your abilities at work, and then you are scared of asking your boss for a promotion, you may not achieve the position or the salary that deserves the efforts and sacrifices you have made for it.
On the other hand, taking risks without thinking carefully can lead to negative results. If someone overestimates their abilities, they may fail to achieve success at work and in their personal life as well. For example, we can see the disadvantages of the two examples mentioned above. If that student’s ability does not meet the university’s requirements, he or she will be denied admission and miss out on opportunities at other universities that are more suitable. In the case of that employee, if he overrates his work, he may lose his current position or even his job.
In conclusion, despite the fact that there are several negative aspects to taking risks, I believe that, with careful consideration, the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75202976366 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538235294118 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8802079882 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247312490124 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071348208183 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590037731662 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119488474518 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574623453273 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75202976366 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538235294118 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8802079882 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247312490124 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071348208183 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590037731662 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119488474518 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574623453273 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.