In this day and age, some languages are widely spoken in a number of countries which is in stark contrast to the deterioration of some others. In my opinion, I believe that this trend has both positive and negative consequences.
On the one hand, universal languages bring many benefits to people both in terms of communication and business. In particular, the advent of common languages has facilitated communication to develop. Apparently, with a quarter of the world's population speaking English, language barrier, once considered a major obstacle, is no longer difficult to overcome. On an economic level, commonly spoken languages significantly promote international business. In other words, several languages can be considered international business languages. Therefore, it is easy for some countries to gain benefits from international economic cooperation through negotiation. For example, in main business offices in world financial centers such as the UK and USA, English has long been the default commercial language.
On the other hand, the decline in the number of speakers of other languages considerably impacts cultural diversity and communities. Firstly, language seems to be the soul of culture because it is a means of communication and exchanging customs among ethnicity. With each language that dies, humans lose a huge cultural legacy. In addition, this situation has prevented a group of people from connecting to the world. Particularly, speakers of less common languages appear to be isolated from the community. As a result, they tend to have trouble communicating because most people don't understand what they are saying.
To conclude, the dominance of several languages brings both advantages and disadvantages based on different situations. However, I insist that language users should strike a balance between using common languages and preserving less popular languages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 234, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...elop. Apparently, with a quarter of the worlds population speaking English, language b...
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Line 3, column 582, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ouble communicating because most people dont understand what they are saying. To c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in particular, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62847222222 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18147844143 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0651745611 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.3529411765 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.82352941176 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228556294977 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698268741784 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04856437671 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137818758605 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423429373934 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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