Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. To what extent do you agree?
There has been heated debate over whether the majority of crimes are caused by poverty. While it is true that poverty is the principal reason leading to unlawful acts such as robbery and theft, I believe it is not accountable for most crimes. Other factors namely innate poor characteristics and drug abuse are also great crime attributes.
It is obvious that under certain circumstances, poverty induces crime. To commence with, people would participate in illegal activities such as robbery and theft if their standard of living disable them from meeting their basic needs. In addition, drug dealers in some areas will take advantage of the poor due to their desperation and ignorant and exploit them to smug narcotics. Another way that poverty correlates to crime is that impoverished minors do not have access to proper education, leading to a myriad of problems including no sense of propriety and violence. Vital to good citizenship is education, and since a significant number of these kids grow up in slums, violence is the only method available to resolve conflict and protect themselves.
On the other hand, a popular belief is that a person’s nature determines criminal capabilities in the future. A child who performs acts such as bullying from a young age, for instance, is proved to have a higher potential of committing violent crimes in the future. Furthermore, those who possess laziness are more prone to violate the law as they seek easy money without having to work for it. Increasing figures of youngsters today choose to steal instead of working hard to earn money for illicit purposes (buying alcohol or drugs).
In conclusion, the relationship between poverty and crime is apparent, yet other contributors also play a significant role in the increasing rate of many crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13220338983 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80609588003 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4909772683 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.461538462 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145384789034 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464791977072 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425493592419 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826057311061 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433710521648 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.