The lecture discusses the painter Jackson Pollock. Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they illustrate specific points made in the reading passage.
Both the reading and the listening discuss abstract expressionism. The reading stated it was a movement in painting from New York. Moreover, the lecture illustrates specific points made in the reading passage. The professor says the movement had as leader an american called Jack.
The first point the professor makes is Jack was a self expression man. She elaborates he was the greatest American painter. As one example she says he influenced many others painters to create their own painters. This illustrates the point made in the reading. The latter states the abstract expression valued the act of painting itself.
Furthermore, the professor points out that he painted his canvas on the floor. She explains he walked around the canvas. To illustrate, he fought it was easier to paint canvas. This point illustrates the point from the passage. According to the article, abstract expressionists gave special attention to surface qualities of paint, such as texture.
Finally, the professor says that Jack danced around the canvas. He used spray to paint it because it gave special tone for it. It was like an identification piece of work. As the speaker has it, he was called over painter. For instance, he filled the canvas with lines, many colors and a skillful dash. This point illustrates the key point made in the article. According to the reading, abstract expressionists has preference for dramatically large canvas.
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The professor says the movement had as leader an american called Jack.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
he fought it was easier to paint canvas.
Description: two verbs in one sentence. can you re-write this sentence?
abstract expressionists has preference
abstract expressionists have the preference
Sentence: As one example she says he influenced many others painters to create their own painters.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to others and painters
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
some sentences are not developed properly, like:
This point illustrates the point from the passage
As the speaker has it, he was called over painter.
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