The bar chart shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2022 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant.
The bar chart gives information on the percentage of books which people rent from two rural libraries between June and September in 2022. Meanwhile, the pie chart illustrates the proportion of different kinds of books that were borrowed throughout 4 months. Overall, Eldon is the library that stood as the higher lender of books over the given period when Science was the most popular choice among 4 types. In detail, the number of books that were borrowed from 2 libraries fluctuated during this time frame. In the first two months, Tusayan reported a significant increase, from 30% in June to 65% in July whereas Eldon's borrowed books from 70% declined considerably to about 35%. In August, Eldon lent more books than the other library with 60% when Tusayan only recorded 40%. The last month saw an dramatic growth of borrowed books from Eldon with more than 80%. By contrast, Tusayan only allowed approximately 20% of books to its readers in September. It is obvious that people mostly borrowed Science and History books from two libraries with 35% and 30%, respectively. These 2 types of books, combined made up more than half of the total number. Besides, the next two slices, Biography and Fiction accounts for about 35% that was as much as the proportion of Science books.
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- Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 683, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...70% declined considerably to about 35%. In August, Eldon lent more books than the ...
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Line 1, column 799, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...n only recorded 40%. The last month saw an dramatic growth of borrowed books from ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91705069124 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49217169306 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594470046083 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9358769889 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338489653528 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137250896621 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103492921839 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.338489653528 0.15604864568 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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