As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that organisations have social responsibilities along with generating profit. I wholeheartedly agree with this statement, as businesses also need to have social activities other than financial work.
On the one hand, corporations focusing on making money is plausible for a combination of reasons. First and foremost, companies require stable financial support in order to establish products and projects. For instance, during COVID, numerous businesses, such as Chanel and H&M in many countries, ran up against bankruptcy owing to the lack of income to manufacture and proceed with their plans. Furthermore, so as to operate smoothly, staff need to be paid rightly and accordingly to contracts, equipment must also be up to date in support of the job of staff. Hence, profit is the utmost necessity to encourage staff to work efficiently and maintain the quality of equipment. As a result, companies will be able to function properly and avoid falling apart.
On the other hand, I believe that businesses are also in charge of making contributions to society. The primary reason is that they play a substantial role in developing the economy of a community. Therefore, organisations need to take their impact on society into consideration and grow their business more in order to bring back income. Moreover, businesses exist thanks to the permission of governments and consumers. So it is undeniable that they should attempt effective and helpful activities for the population in return, such as establishing scholarships, employment opportunities, and charities.
To sum up, I believe that although it is essential for companies to make money, they should also be socially responsible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... proceed with their plans. Furthermore, so as to operate smoothly, staff need to be paid...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43820224719 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21146580297 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.333374612 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188729849526 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638134104479 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736839520776 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135592984609 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778020710207 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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