Describe your favorite hobby, pastime
Hello there! I'm Nga. Today, I would like to introduce my hobby. I have some pastime activities. I'm keen on catching a flick, listening to some tunes, going backpacking, and working out. Among them, listening to some tunes is my cup of tea. Music is an inseparable part of my life. Since childhood, listening to music has become my hobby because it is very relaxing and enjoyable. I can listen to my favorite tunes every day because it helps me to relieve stress and anxiety. I'm a die-hard of pop, R&B, and rap music. Personally, it doesn't matter in which language a song is, or who the singer is as long as I enjoy the melody. And my all-time favorite song is "Double take" by Dhruv. This song is about a man falling in love with his best friend. It is a gentle and romantic song with a bit of sadness. I first heard this song on Spotify a year ago. At first, what I like most about this song is that it has a catchy tune but a meaningful flow. Music is a universal language enjoyed by people, from all cultures, and it has proven to be a great source of entertainment. In fact, listening to music helps me unwind after a hard-working day because I can enjoy the feeling of listening to a song. It improves my mood and emotions and gives me a positive outlook on life. In addition, when I listen to music, I feel it can help me promote focus and concentration so that I can focus more effectively on the work I am doing. I also do yoga and exercise a few times a week, and working out with music improves my mood and helps my body move more efficiently. When I have a stressful day, one of the best things I can do is to sit with friends or family and listen to some tunes. It will make me feel at ease inside by releasing any tension I may have in my soul. And then I feel like a whole new person! It brings fresh and positive energy to me. It's a remedy for tiredness and forgetting about my personal problems. This is another reason why listening to music is a great hobby.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, then, i feel, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 6.8 294% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 5.60731707317 927% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 965.302439024 166% => OK
No of words: 380.0 196.424390244 193% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22631578947 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 3.73543355544 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56624692278 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 106.607317073 185% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518421052632 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 283.868780488 187% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 1.53170731707 914% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.482926829268 1449% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 8.94146341463 280% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9341479928 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.24 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.2 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 3.70975609756 485% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0392864253414 0.215688989381 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0135469908683 0.103423049105 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325797530501 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0392864253414 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 13.2329268293 46% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 11.4140731707 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 40.7170731707 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.4329268293 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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