The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves

Since, world is progessing no like precedent in his of humann kind, everybody is in hustle, less time for respite. Moreover, in world teeming wiht vie to prevail wiht others, keen to be
better version of oneself.Apparently, it seems swift life engender conundrum than it resolves. Technological advancedment promptly impacted , how we interact with pepole- Friends, realative , etc. we have no time meet them interact with them in real time rather we interact virtually via social media like instagram, facebook, etc. Because of swift life sytle we live in. NOnetheless, swift life is not elephant in room, it is how we adapat with rapid pace of life- we have should not merely have engouh resillience but acument to adpot the with precipate life,
which is demand of world new technologically advancing world, which make lifet better and better.

However, rapid life style lead us to not only break down , but also besieged with with many conundrum. In particualr, english premier league, which elite football competition in world played in england, it comprises 20 teams - vie for title for every year's , and each team need to play 18 games per seasion. If we conieve from player point of view, it is taxing physically and mentally. Yes, palayer earn a ample amount of money to which enough to underwritte finanaically. Still, myriad number of games render many parlous injury- which are life threatning, agonyzing both physicall and meantally.

Having said that, it is still odds to cope with rapid pace of life, it all about meantlity and acumen to deal with it. since everyone is in pit, and be avant grade in electric vechiel revoulution, scientist working day and night theri heart out to make break through in in battery technology which is cardinal part of electric vechile. Eventually, which make life of every
person better be reducing the number of fossil fuel vechiles- reduce carbon emission so that global warming problem can be controlled.

Even though swift rend problems, if u have acumen and deft , it can ultimately lead to towards progress, halcyon of humandkind. AS everything is built in pain.

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Average: 5.4 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t in his of humann kind, everybody is in hustle, less time for respite. Moreover,...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t vie to prevail wiht others, keen to be better version of oneself.Apparently, it...
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Suggestion: Apparently
...en to be better version of oneself.Apparently, it seems swift life engender conundrum...
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Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...nological advancedment promptly impacted , how we interact with pepole- Friends, r...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...interact with pepole- Friends, realative , etc. we have no time meet them interact...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ife style lead us to not only break down , but also besieged with with many conund...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: with
...not only break down , but also besieged with with many conundrum. In particualr, english ...
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Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun conundrum seems to be countable; consider using: 'many conundrums'.
Suggestion: many conundrums
...reak down , but also besieged with with many conundrum. In particualr, english premier league,...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...20 teams - vie for title for every years , and each team need to play 18 games per...
^^
Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...18 games per seasion. If we conieve from player point of view, it is taxing physi...
^^
Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...sically and mentally. Yes, palayer earn a ample amount of money to which enough ...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...es, palayer earn a ample amount of money to which enough to underwritte finanaica...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...cumen to deal with it. since everyone is in pit, and be avant grade in electric ...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...deal with it. since everyone is in pit, and be avant grade in electric vechiel r...
^^
Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...t theri heart out to make break through in in battery technology which is cardinal pa...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le. Eventually, which make life of every person better be reducing the number of ...
^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al warming problem can be controlled. Even though swift rend problems, if u ha...
^^^
Line 10, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rend problems, if u have acumen and deft , it can ultimately lead to towards progr...
^^
Line 10, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “AS” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...owards progress, halcyon of humandkind. AS everything is built in pain.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74553470209 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.4932671777 130% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4578047544 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.9375 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121041679795 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361584983882 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451856569816 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425170684124 0.150359130593 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441797475571 0.0667264976115 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t in his of humann kind, everybody is in hustle, less time for respite. Moreover,...
^^
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t vie to prevail wiht others, keen to be better version of oneself.Apparently, it...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Apparently
...en to be better version of oneself.Apparently, it seems swift life engender conundrum...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nological advancedment promptly impacted , how we interact with pepole- Friends, r...
^^
Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...interact with pepole- Friends, realative , etc. we have no time meet them interact...
^^
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ife style lead us to not only break down , but also besieged with with many conund...
^^
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: with
...not only break down , but also besieged with with many conundrum. In particualr, english ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun conundrum seems to be countable; consider using: 'many conundrums'.
Suggestion: many conundrums
...reak down , but also besieged with with many conundrum. In particualr, english premier league,...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...20 teams - vie for title for every years , and each team need to play 18 games per...
^^
Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...18 games per seasion. If we conieve from player point of view, it is taxing physi...
^^
Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...sically and mentally. Yes, palayer earn a ample amount of money to which enough ...
^
Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es, palayer earn a ample amount of money to which enough to underwritte finanaica...
^^
Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cumen to deal with it. since everyone is in pit, and be avant grade in electric ...
^^
Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...deal with it. since everyone is in pit, and be avant grade in electric vechiel r...
^^
Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...t theri heart out to make break through in in battery technology which is cardinal pa...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le. Eventually, which make life of every person better be reducing the number of ...
^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al warming problem can be controlled. Even though swift rend problems, if u ha...
^^^
Line 10, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rend problems, if u have acumen and deft , it can ultimately lead to towards progr...
^^
Line 10, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “AS” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...owards progress, halcyon of humandkind. AS everything is built in pain.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74553470209 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.4932671777 130% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4578047544 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.9375 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121041679795 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361584983882 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451856569816 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425170684124 0.150359130593 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441797475571 0.0667264976115 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.