Claim: In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Since, buregeon of any field required new leader which means new leader bring new idea's and personality, which is key for success in any field. If top leadership stay in power for long time, it would be detrimental for any field- education, business, goverment e.t.c. Their period to lead the particular field must be constarained. Nonetheless, summite leadership should step down is would be parochial conjecture, even if new leadership is cardinal to success of any fied, leader should approbation for at least 10 years period, since idea of leader to comme in effect required time. However, 5 year period is fleeting for any idea to burgeon and show effect.
Meanwhile, some may have conjecture that 5 year period enough for leader to lead and impliment their idea, otherwise without circumscribe theri regin they would evnetually turn out, not only dicatator but also despot. since, unwarranted power to zenith level leadership , leads to create quagmire, chronism with their own interest. For instance, russia presiden putin, every
body know about him, how he continue to stay in power for decade long time, creating pendimonium not only in his country but also their neighbour country ukarine. Moreover, putin squelch human right in his own country, supprese theri form of political opposition, censor on media and freedom of expression.
However, to step from power in 5 year's period may be proved out be expansive, to elected per se very ardous process required lot of engergy, money and people mobility. so, leader at top level at any field should given the considerabale time to testimony their idea. In particular, indian elction system five time period is given to elected prime minister, after that automatically , he should resigned from the office, but same person is also allowed to fight for same post for next tenure, which allow the voter to adjudicate his work and idea during his tenure.
Hence, pith to sucess in any field is to come with new leaderhip, but also allowing time for that idea would be more comprehensive conjectral. And to step down from particular post of summit post should be democractic, people should given choice to elcted their leader, but not mandatory to step down his post after 5 year period. Eventually, it leads better for organiazation as well every member to succed as group.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...ut, not only dicatator but also despot. since, unwarranted power to zenith level lead...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rranted power to zenith level leadership , leads to create quagmire, chronism with...
^^
Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... interest. For instance, russia presiden putin, every body know about him, how ...
^^
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... instance, russia presiden putin, every body know about him, how he continue to ...
^^^
Line 6, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... of engergy, money and people mobility. so, leader at top level at any field shoul...
^^
Line 6, column 213, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have given' or 'give'?
Suggestion: have given; give
...leader at top level at any field should given the considerabale time to testimony the...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 314, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'period' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'periods'.
Suggestion: periods
...icular, indian elction system five time period is given to elected prime minister, aft...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 381, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...prime minister, after that automatically , he should resigned from the office, but...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... his work and idea during his tenure. Hence, pith to sucess in any field is to...
^^^
Line 8, column 234, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have given' or 'give'?
Suggestion: have given; give
...st should be democractic, people should given choice to elcted their leader, but not ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, while, at least, for instance, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08051948052 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65548856033 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9232573103 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.714285714 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 5.21951772744 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249254280107 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967238090687 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646955815418 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137627186944 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895700902804 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...ut, not only dicatator but also despot. since, unwarranted power to zenith level lead...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rranted power to zenith level leadership , leads to create quagmire, chronism with...
^^
Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... interest. For instance, russia presiden putin, every body know about him, how ...
^^
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... instance, russia presiden putin, every body know about him, how he continue to ...
^^^
Line 6, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... of engergy, money and people mobility. so, leader at top level at any field shoul...
^^
Line 6, column 213, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have given' or 'give'?
Suggestion: have given; give
...leader at top level at any field should given the considerabale time to testimony the...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 314, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'period' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'periods'.
Suggestion: periods
...icular, indian elction system five time period is given to elected prime minister, aft...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 381, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...prime minister, after that automatically , he should resigned from the office, but...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... his work and idea during his tenure. Hence, pith to sucess in any field is to...
^^^
Line 8, column 234, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have given' or 'give'?
Suggestion: have given; give
...st should be democractic, people should given choice to elcted their leader, but not ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, while, at least, for instance, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08051948052 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65548856033 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9232573103 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.714285714 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 5.21951772744 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249254280107 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967238090687 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646955815418 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137627186944 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895700902804 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.