Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion on the issue bove.
Nowadays, a minority of individuals in the current temporary society have a tendency to abort due to several personal life’ issues. There are some arguments that this is legal, whereas others believe that such action should not be done for various reasons. The essay below will discuss both views and give the opinion to the issue above.
On the one hand, pregnant inhabitants use abortion as a tool to rebalance and stabilize their current life situation. For instance, indivisuals don’t own enough finances and fortunes to care for their future generations or can’t afford to maintain a better life for them. Hence, they could either decrease their stress or reduce the burden of daily life. Moreover, using the mentioned action could provide a plethora of breakthroughs in resolving conflicts between family members.
On the other hand, although abortion has negligible influence on a certain individual, it could have an impact on the future generation. In general, the population in Japan has decreased slightly in recent years due to the fact that abortion has been a common action for the majority of young women for a while. As a result, the decreasing population not only minimizes the industrialization and modernization of the countries but also has a substantial impact on the human resources in many industries. Furthermore, abortion is both an inhumane solution to solve people's life issues and shows that they nowadays are more heartless and tend to follow indivisualism. Other words, a mother has to face many physical side-effects problems, which can ultimately raise the risk of her death. Breast cancer risk, premature death, mental disorder are some examples of health problems described by WHO, which caused mainly due to aborting a baby.
In conclusion, from my perspective, the society and community shoudl prevent people from abort. Abortion is a inhumanity and it could have a substantial impact on the the minds every female inhabitant who worries about the later life.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 891, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: Whom
...xamples of health problems described by WHO, which caused mainly due to aborting a ...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... prevent people from abort. Abortion is a inhumanity and it could have a substant...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...d it could have a substantial impact on the the minds every female inhabitant who worri...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...d it could have a substantial impact on the the minds every female inhabitant who worri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24534161491 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8563207702 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624223602484 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7451170468 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214657076854 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677657330806 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592134910868 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131062757163 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784319054333 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 891, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: Whom
...xamples of health problems described by WHO, which caused mainly due to aborting a ...
^^^
Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... prevent people from abort. Abortion is a inhumanity and it could have a substant...
^
Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...d it could have a substantial impact on the the minds every female inhabitant who worri...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...d it could have a substantial impact on the the minds every female inhabitant who worri...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24534161491 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8563207702 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624223602484 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7451170468 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214657076854 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677657330806 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592134910868 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131062757163 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784319054333 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.