Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people think that one can do a few things well because there are a lot of different things to do every day. Personally, I assert it is true, especially when the following reasons are taken into consideration.
To begin with, experience is important to make a thing well done. People always say, practice makes perfect, which is true, in my opinion. However, when there are a lot of things for one person to do, he/she can not pay attention to one certain thing and get enough experience. In this way, one can be not adept at the thing and can not make the thing well done. My personal experience is a compelling example for this. When I was a first-year student in university, I chose about ten classes in that semester because I wanted to learn as much as I can. However, as time went by, I found I had not enough time to study, deal with homework, or prepare presentations for each class. I can not be fully prepared for each exam or test. In the end, I failed three classes that semester.
Furthermore, stress is harmful to one person when dealing with a lot of things. When one has a lot of work to do, he/she may get distressed and exhausted. This kind of stress is not conducive to getting a job well done. About two years ago, I was a student in senior high school. I fell in love with a girl who was my classmate. However, at that time, I have a lot of things to do, preparing for the university entrance exam, and taking care of my little brother who was a pupil. So many things just stacked together and I felt exhausted after getting into bed. I was so nervous about my university entrance exam because it determines my future. At last, I failed to get an offer from my dream school and I feel pity for myself.
Admittedly, some people can do everything well even if there is a lot of work to do. But this kind of person is rare and most of us is just generic person.
In conclusion, I think one can not do everything well when there is a large amount of things to be done.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, i feel, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2962962963 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50904134796 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473544973545 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8634095061 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.6086956522 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4347826087 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82608695652 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254179718094 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775779603544 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916263896994 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189760463754 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834430563145 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, i feel, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2962962963 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50904134796 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473544973545 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8634095061 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.6086956522 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4347826087 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82608695652 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254179718094 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775779603544 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916263896994 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189760463754 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834430563145 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.