Some people consider art to be essential and others think it is not. Which view do you agree with and why?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Art is one of the greatest human inventions, which clearly reflects our cultures, thoughts, and emotions. However, many people claim that it should not be considered that crucial, while others strongly oppose this idea. From my perspective, I firmly believe that art has played an inevitable part of our history, for some reasons below.
First and foremost, one of the major needs of people is art, since it is ideally suitable to record history before writing. As can be seen in the very primitive time, many pieces of cave paintings have brought modern people a wealth of valuable information about the prehistory time and its features, without the need for a word. In addition, art has always been created and depicted through every piece of human work, whether or not they are aware of it, before many of them were fully developed into timeless masterpieces. For example, Ishtar Gate, built in the Balybon era in Iraq, has always shocked us for its construction scale and artistic architectural magnificence. Until now, we still have been unable to fully discover its mysteries.
Moreover, art has been an effective means of entertainment throughout history. Obviously, music is created in order to auditorily express our feelings, thoughts, and events. Many music masterpieces, such as Beethoven's Symphonies and Mozart's Piano Sonates, are still valuable today. Furthermore, many forms of art have become commercially profitable. For instance, the revenues of some South Korean entertainment companies such as SM, YG, and JYP drastically rise whenever their famous bands make a comeback with music videos and merchandise.
In summary, I personally find art indispensable in my life. No matter how much people try to eliminate art from their lives, it still plays a vital role in others', for sure.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 419, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...cted through every piece of human work, whether or not they are aware of it, before many of th...
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Line 3, column 541, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eback with music videos and merchandise. In summary, I personally find art indisp...
^^^
Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...indispensable in my life. No matter how much people try to eliminate art from their ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20618556701 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86702989474 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659793814433 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8118048801 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.214285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152739511168 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492177147221 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388367721333 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098118300286 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460506287772 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 419, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...cted through every piece of human work, whether or not they are aware of it, before many of th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 541, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eback with music videos and merchandise. In summary, I personally find art indisp...
^^^
Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...indispensable in my life. No matter how much people try to eliminate art from their ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20618556701 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86702989474 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659793814433 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8118048801 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.214285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152739511168 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492177147221 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388367721333 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098118300286 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460506287772 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.