The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea.
The given pictures demonstrate by which tea is manufactured and how to make a cup of tea.
Overall, it can be clearly observed that the process involves 18 consecutive stages starting with sowing tea seeds in India, China, and culminating in enjoying a cup of tea.
Initially, the tea seeds have to be sown in India and China. After absorbing enough sunlight to grow, the tender tea leaves are then harvested and put in the basket. This process is followed by drying the picked tea leaves under the sun. Once the leaves have been dried, they get packed into boxes and loaded onto a lorry in order to transport to the supermarket, where customers buy and bring it back home.
The first step to make a cup of tea is filling a kettle with some water and put it on the stove to boil. When the kettle has boiled, the water is poured into a cup that has a tea bag inside. At this point, the tea is added up with milk and sugar for better flavor. The entire process ends up with a top notch cup of tea which is ready to be enjoyed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...demonstrate by which tea is manufactured and how to make a cup of tea. Overall, ...
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...tially, the tea seeds have to be sown in India and China. After absorbing enough ...
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...oaded onto a lorry in order to transport to the supermarket, where customers buy ...
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Suggestion: top-notch
...avor. The entire process ends up with a top notch cup of tea which is ready to be enjoyed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28205128205 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26191635891 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2967827031 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365138511277 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155987354102 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103369948668 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254275708159 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105963668538 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.