This pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The given pictures illustrate by which tomato ketchup is manufactured.
Overall, it can be clearly observed that the whole process involves 15 consecutive stages starting with harvesting tomatoes and put them in baskets and culminating in enjoying ketchup with food.
Initially, the ripe tomatoes have been picked and put in baskets before choosing qualified ones. After that, the selected tomatoes are delivered to a factory, where there stalk, seeds and skin are removed. Once the peeled tomatoes have been thrown in a container, they are crushed into a mixture. This process is following by adding sugar, vinegar, salt to make the ketchup become more flavourful. The sauce is then boiled and left for cooling down in two hours.
The process continue with bottling and labeling the ketchup before being examined the quality carefully. Subsequently, those bottles are packed in boxes in order to send them to supermarkets. Finally, the consumers use tomato ketchup to eat with some dishes such as hamburgers or fries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ave been thrown in a container, they are crushed into a mixture. This process is ...
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...supermarkets. Finally, the consumers use tomato ketchup to eat with some dishes s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28220858896 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66209602401 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680981595092 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7988165473 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160359267775 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623464606703 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502323541013 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106147857718 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489227386726 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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