In recent decades , There has been considerable debate regarding the roles and ...of sports. I firmly concur with the opinion of promoting such activities among people to foster healthy living . However, some people state that there are numerous practices can be adopted to sustain fit. As far as i am concerned to this issue , I reckon that both opinions have their own place and people should sue all sort of methods that help them maintaining their health.
To kick off , it is no exaggeration to say that international sports are quite popular among all walks of people. As people look up to them as their ideals and imitate their day-to-day healthy lifestyles to be the spitting image of them. In this way, players have been influencing the youth and inculcating the sense of active living. To illustrate this real life example can be taken , cricket is one of the most admirable sport in India and children, youngsters and adults spare sometime from their busy schedule to be on cricket grounds. Thus , by following their passion , they continue to stay perfectly fine.
On the latter opinion , people have highlighted that one should indulge in active routines rather than global sports because an individual cannot always pick time for these sports but can remain active throughout the day. Moreover, some activities such as stairs climbing, skipping, are all involved in our daily lifestyle and one need not to go out of the way to find large grounds to exercise them. However , sports are good means to stay fit but cannot practice it everyday as it entails equipments like if someone is really into football , he needs a football and a big space while we do exercises for example cardio or aerobics, it can be done just with physical efforts. Therefore , there are myriad ways which we can adopt to stay healthy at no extra hours and cost.
To recapitulate, according to above preceding discussion , I am highly inclined to my notion and weighed both the sides equally. Eventually , in my viewpoint we must include all activities in our normal life and considerate sports as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, really, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i reckon, sort of, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 31.9359605911 157% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1207.87684729 144% => OK
No of words: 353.0 242.827586207 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91501416431 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61548487769 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 139.433497537 158% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623229461756 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 379.143842365 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.65517241379 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6173903398 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.25397266985 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.33497536946 337% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190726627153 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604575322299 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592619666509 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114628145043 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733065239278 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.