Given are the two maps delineating the renovation of a coastal island over a course of time, commencing from agriculture to relaxing purposes.
Perceptibly, the west bank of the cliffs has been transformed drastically while the opposite is true for the other.
In terms of the west bank of the cliffs, farm buildings were accessed by the road in the heart of the area running from west to east which has been demolished to give room for a car park. Meanwhile, the land used for agricultural purposes in the left-hand side has been planted with trees and become the place for myriad outdoor activities. Furthermore, a coffee shop has been built to the north-west of this area which is the ideal place for sight-seeing. Likewise, the unused land and animals’ lodging have been turned into the lake with cluster of trees around. In addition, there are footsteps linked the the carpark with the lake and woods so that visitors could access this area.
Regarding the opposite bank of the cliffs, there is no plateau in the position of the beach. There are myriad activities in the beach after the steps cross over the cliffs have been constructed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the two maps delineating the renovation...
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Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se, the unused land and animals’ lodging have been turned into the lake with clus...
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Line 3, column 606, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...In addition, there are footsteps linked the the carpark with the lake and woods so that...
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Line 3, column 606, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...In addition, there are footsteps linked the the carpark with the lake and woods so that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, likewise, regarding, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82741116751 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62734369397 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558375634518 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8248490063 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0865029227832 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326275515571 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468647930153 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0487431112475 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568651833137 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.