Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual.
As we live as a society, each individual plays a critical role in developing growth. It is an important pillar for each society in today’s world. I think for people in each city, there are some responsibilities to enhance their environment. Although each society consists of different nations with a different sense of willingness, it is possible if all of the people conduct themselves to this aim. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether individuals have a responsibility to improve the complex environmental issues or whether it is easy to access by the government's play. I am personally content that this issue is multifaceted.
I think access to the desired environment has more chances to occur by each person trying. Furthermore, the meaning of society is a collecting nation, therefore, they live in a certain area and know about crucial situations that they faced recently. For example, we all know, that greenhouse gasses have risen in recent years. It brings hard circumstances for our lives and our children’s future. So, what factors bring to us this situation? Using fossil fuels and private cars, developing the cities and construction such as high buildings, and reducing the green space in a city are the most pollution-causing features. Due to the aforementioned points, people can improve their environment by removing and dropping pollutants from the city‘s surfaces or the ocean’s coast.
The s2ecoond rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that there are more issues in each society that needs all government’s attention to solve. The economics and political tail catch all concentrations in Cabinet. Although the government should provide facilities to improve life expectations, they can not protect the environment totally. Consider my personal experience to make this issue clear. Last year, There was extra-hunting in North country that made one species of Chita extinct. Although the government protect them carefully, the hunter made a hard situation.
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- TPO 50 integrated writing
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state sponsored Olympic teams Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- grades encourage students to learn more 66
- all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is 70
- grades encourage students to learn more 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 351, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...sense of willingness, it is possible if all of the people conduct themselves to this aim. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s that they faced recently. For example, we all know, that greenhouse gasses have...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, so, therefore, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34782608696 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17197373627 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599378881988 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7838508169 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6315789474 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0791084503235 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0224412998654 0.076458572812 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387856574775 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541385624206 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563248786253 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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