Recent advancement in technology have made the TV screen so live that people donot feel to go for any live performance.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable to state that there are plethora of electronic gadgets are used by Individuals for entertainment. In this breakneck era
development in machinery have made the television display so live that dwellers donot need to go for any live execution.I agree with this statement to a large extent as there is high cost of live concert and people have hectic schedule.
To commence with, folks can spend time with family.When they will watch live performance on television screen,they can devote quality time with their loved.Resultantly,they can make better relationships with their family members.In addition to this,it is a stress buster activity for people.Nowdays, everyone is depressed due to overloading of work so they watch tv concerts at for entertaining.To exemplify,kapil sharma live show is watched by people to overcome their stress.
Moving further, live shows are expensive.Most of the individuals prefer to watch live shows on television rather than personally visited because tickets of these shows are extremely expensive.To epitome people pay chunk of money to see live cricket match by visiting personally.Moreover,they have hectic schedule.Folks have no leisure time to attend live performance but they love to watch live shows that is possible due to TV screen at home. Consequently, they can watch live concerts on television screen during house hold chores.So,why not individuals want to live performance on TV screen if they have no free time for went to live program?
However,i may not overlook the other side too, individuals have excitement to see their favourite celebrities.They want to met their dearest personality and they attend live concert directly.For instance,in Punjab,most of people Visited in Kabaddi live concert to met their favourite players.What is more, it put adverse impact on youngsters health.While watching television,they also watch advertisement related to energy drinks.Eventually, they try to these drinks which cause numerous health problems.
To recapitulate, undoubtedly,most of people preferred to watch television live show at home due to hectic schedule.Although it put adverse impact on adults health, yet it is a stress buster activity for individuals.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Line 6, column 214, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...concert directly.For instance,in Punjab,most of people Visited in Kabaddi live concert to met ...
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Suggestion: What
... concert to met their favourite players.What is more, it put adverse impact on young...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
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...problems. To recapitulate, undoubtedly,most of people preferred to watch television live show...
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...ive show at home due to hectic schedule.Although it put adverse impact on adults health,...
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Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...edule.Although it put adverse impact on adults health, yet it is a stress buster activ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60355029586 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62475663792 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.661023928 49.4020404114 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 270.571428571 106.682146367 254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.2857142857 20.7667163134 233% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.4285714286 7.06120827912 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294835070359 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164623364519 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106075048756 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163736697607 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123805709593 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.1 13.0946893788 222% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.84 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.09 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...donot need to go for any live execution.I agree with this statement to a large ex...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
... with, folks can spend time with family.When they will watch live performance on tel...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...ch live performance on television screen,they can devote quality time with their love...
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Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Resultantly
...an devote quality time with their loved.Resultantly,they can make better relationships with...
^^^^^^^^^^^
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...uality time with their loved.Resultantly,they can make better relationships with thei...
^^^^^
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...relationships with their family members.In addition to this,it is a stress buster ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...their family members.In addition to this,it is a stress buster activity for people....
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nowdays
... is a stress buster activity for people.Nowdays, everyone is depressed due to overloadi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...y watch tv concerts at for entertaining.To exemplify,kapil sharma live show is wat...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , kapil
...oncerts at for entertaining.To exemplify,kapil sharma live show is watched by people t...
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Suggestion: Most
...oving further, live shows are expensive.Most of the individuals prefer to watch live...
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Suggestion: To
... of these shows are extremely expensive.To epitome people pay chunk of money to se...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ve cricket match by visiting personally.Moreover,they have hectic schedule.Folks have no...
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Suggestion: , they
...et match by visiting personally.Moreover,they have hectic schedule.Folks have no leis...
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...ally.Moreover,they have hectic schedule.Folks have no leisure time to attend live per...
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Suggestion: So
...evision screen during house hold chores.So,why not individuals want to live perfor...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , why
...ision screen during house hold chores.So,why not individuals want to live performanc...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
... time for went to live program? However,i may not overlook the other side too, in...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...time for went to live program? However,i may not overlook the other side too, in...
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Suggestion: They
...ment to see their favourite celebrities.They want to met their dearest personality a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...y and they attend live concert directly.For instance,in Punjab,most of people Visit...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...ttend live concert directly.For instance,in Punjab,most of people Visited in Kabadd...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , most
... concert directly.For instance,in Punjab,most of people Visited in Kabaddi live conce...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...concert directly.For instance,in Punjab,most of people Visited in Kabaddi live concert to met ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: What
... concert to met their favourite players.What is more, it put adverse impact on young...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
....What is more, it put adverse impact on youngsters health.While watching television,they a...
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...put adverse impact on youngsters health.While watching television,they also watch adv...
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Suggestion: , they
...ngsters health.While watching television,they also watch advertisement related to ene...
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Suggestion: Eventually
... advertisement related to energy drinks.Eventually, they try to these drinks which cause n...
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Suggestion: , most
... problems. To recapitulate, undoubtedly,most of people preferred to watch television...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...problems. To recapitulate, undoubtedly,most of people preferred to watch television live show...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...ive show at home due to hectic schedule.Although it put adverse impact on adults health,...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...edule.Although it put adverse impact on adults health, yet it is a stress buster activ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60355029586 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62475663792 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.661023928 49.4020404114 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 270.571428571 106.682146367 254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.2857142857 20.7667163134 233% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.4285714286 7.06120827912 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294835070359 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164623364519 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106075048756 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163736697607 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123805709593 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.1 13.0946893788 222% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.84 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.09 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.