Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Friends are very important parts of our lives. They are the ones with whom we can share all our joy and sorrow without being judged. Some people would think it's better to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Others, would disagree. In my view, it's better to make new friends rather than continuing with old friends for two reasons.
First, we are able to get lot more fun. We can attain different and distinctive chracteristics from new friends. For example, in my childhood before I went to do my schooling in Kakinads, I used to spend a lot of time with myself and all my old friends are similar kind.
I used to spend a lot of time indoor by watching television, reading books and soon. At that time i was an introvert: not talking to people and leading my life privately. When i moved to kakinada a different kind of exposure was experienced because of introduction to new friends. Specifically, when i was with Manoj and Vinod , two of my new friends in kakinada i used to play and enjoy for a long time. I used to play football, cricket for hours until we are tired. As you can see, those moments are experienced by me only after I made new friends.
Second, we are able to attain knowledge. We can gain s lot of academic and traditional knowledge when we make new friends. For instance, before I want to enroll for Engineering, we used to live in Tuni, an orthodox South Indian region. Our family moved to Punjab which is completely a unfamiliar tradition to do my engineering.Their my neighborhood consists of wholly Sikh cmmunity. As my parents and myself made friends with neighborhood we tend to gain knowledge on their traditions. We came to know the food habits and traditional food dishes of their community which we liked a lot.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54402515723 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7689000559 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51572327044 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6889818784 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.25 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207503593649 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638250567049 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630141215584 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138092855482 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062484526161 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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