The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013
The bar charts demonstrate the price of tickets from Sydney to Melbourne and vice versa within a two-week period in 2013.
Overall, the prices on weekends were always higher than those on weekdays, except for Mondays. In addition, from Tuesdays to Thursdays, there was a relatively similar price for both types of flights.
Regarding flights from Sydney to Melbourne, the tickets were the most expensive at 80$ in the first week, 30$ higher than the same day in the second one. In the next three days of both weeks, clients had to pay no more than 40$ for each ticket. The prices then dramatically increased to 75$ before gradually dropping to 50$, which was still much more costly than on weekdays, excluding Mondays.
Turning to flights from Melbourne to Sydney, flight tickets cost 60$ on the first day of week one, in comparison with 40$ on Monday next week. The fares on the next days followed the same trend as in the other turn, with the prices being similar at around 38$ for each ticket. On Fridays, both prices reach a peak of 80$ and 60$, consecutively. In the last two days, ticket prices fell to 60$ on Saturday and 50$ on Sunday while week two had the same price of 50$.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$80'.
Suggestion: $80
... the tickets were the most expensive at 80$ in the first week, 30$ higher than the ...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$30'.
Suggestion: $30
...ost expensive at 80$ in the first week, 30$ higher than the same day in the second ...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$40'.
Suggestion: $40
... weeks, clients had to pay no more than 40$ for each ticket. The prices then dramat...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$75'.
Suggestion: $75
...e prices then dramatically increased to 75$ before gradually dropping to 50$, which...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$50'.
Suggestion: $50
...sed to 75$ before gradually dropping to 50$, which was still much more costly than ...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$60'.
Suggestion: $60
...elbourne to Sydney, flight tickets cost 60$ on the first day of week one, in compar...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$40'.
Suggestion: $40
...rst day of week one, in comparison with 40$ on Monday next week. The fares on the n...
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Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$38'.
Suggestion: $38
...with the prices being similar at around 38$ for each ticket. On Fridays, both price...
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Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$80'.
Suggestion: $80
...On Fridays, both prices reach a peak of 80$ and 60$, consecutively. In the last two...
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Line 7, column 326, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$60'.
Suggestion: $60
...ys, both prices reach a peak of 80$ and 60$, consecutively. In the last two days, t...
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Line 7, column 390, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$60'.
Suggestion: $60
...he last two days, ticket prices fell to 60$ on Saturday and 50$ on Sunday while wee...
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Line 7, column 410, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$50'.
Suggestion: $50
...cket prices fell to 60$ on Saturday and 50$ on Sunday while week two had the same p...
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Line 7, column 461, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$50'.
Suggestion: $50
...ay while week two had the same price of 50$.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, regarding, second, so, still, then, while, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6320754717 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33087607308 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551886792453 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.734995792 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251764438657 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109005235899 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106458417546 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184677291048 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128106623411 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.