Nowadays there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people think this situation caused more problems than it has solved.
What are your opinion on this?
The significance of women's opportunities which were always debatable have become more Controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others disagree. In my opinion, the former proposition in more logical. However, at present, women changes than earlier, when few individuals believe that it is hazardous instead of resolved. This essay will elaborate attributing this trend with examples in the looming paragraph.
To begin with, nowadays women are getting more advantages to work outside and earn money. Besides, they help then family to support financially and play a great role indoor and outdoor. To take an example, women are leading in different sectors such as, becoming a pilot, becoming corporate offices becoming a governor and so on. For example, Bangladeshi prime minister is a woman who has been leading for ten years and it is remarkable in the world. Therefore, it is clearly mentioned that why many are favor of this trend.
On the other hand, a number of people feel that women should not work outside due to create some problems. Moreover, they think, if females go to office, they will unable to attend in family programs and to do household chores properly. As a result, these reasons create few drawbacks in their families and women take decision to separate from partners. However, if men can in be tackled this situation, it would be in around the world.
In conclusion, according to the arguments mentioned above. one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of are Women's opportunities are indeed too great. However, in my opinion, governments and people should be taken some steps to prevent this situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13602941176 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75671316107 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3469946289 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.3125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271607398628 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734778856027 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508662647404 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153065274864 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643847146479 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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