Nowadays there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people think this situation caused more problems than it has solved.
What are your opinion on this?
At present, women have more chances while some people believe that it creates more drawbacks rather than merits. This essay will explicate the reasons attributing to this trend along with remedial measures in the looming paragraphs.
To begin with, I completely argue with the first statement as we live in modern era, where everyone feels that men and women have equal rights for outdoor working. According to the women rights, they can provide different kinds of businesses as well as join in jobs just like a man and help family to financially. However, women are playing a great role in numerous sectors such as leading the government, managing the company and becoming a pilot. For instance, the government of Bangladesh is a woman who has led the country for ten years successfully. So, if women get support from families, they will be showed skills in different sectors. Hence, it is clearly stated that why many are the favor of this trend.
On the other hand, some individuals are supposed to be opposite from the first statement. Nowadays, divorce rates are higher than the past. In addition, the prominent reason of divorce is that women are working outside and spending less time with families as cannot manage home properly. According to these problems many females take decision to separate life from partners. Therefore, if men consider above drawbacks, women are getting more chance to develop in society.
To sum up, although it has few problems, however I totally agree with the benefits of working women and government should be taken some steps to solve this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02641509434 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52595216072 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649056603774 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8557112416 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247502329206 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742276352942 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625435947707 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153211567145 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070907945275 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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