It has long been a subject of discussion whether human behavior can be limited by laws or does it have a minor impact on our lives. The former notion has several elements that deserve attention, and I will explain using pertained arguments.
There are myriads of arguments supporting my context, and the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that people tend to live according to rules and regulations until they are fined hefty sums of penalties. As a tangible example, a survey was done by the Stanford University where it was asserted that humans behave differently when they are imposed with laws, and like animals when they do not have to abide by any regulations set by the government. Hence, it is clearly apparent why many citizens of Australia are more peaceful and patient than those of the United States of America. Noticeably, teenagers who have certain restrictions by their parents tend to be more respective than others.
On the other hand, freedom of speech is never practiced in countries where political interference plays a crucial role. The Government impose laws where the residents are demanded to raise voice only in favor of their political electorates.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that human and animals will have no difference - if laws are not practiced. Therefore, it can be rightly said human behavior is reflected by the laws, and it greatly impact our lives.
- Nowadays it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspect of one s life such as leisure time with family members How important do you think is this balance What kind of people would find it hard to achieve 88
- With the increase of digital media available online the role of the library has become obsolete University should provide digital material rather than textbooks Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this position and give your own point of view 88
- Some people think human behaviors can be limited by laws others think laws have little effect What is your opinion 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 261, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'impacts'?
Suggestion: impacts
...s reflected by the laws, and it greatly impact our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, therefore, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01234567901 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73980237705 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2452257311 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.8 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203440141733 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738002903861 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772978117466 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125851220406 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653858260392 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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