Rule, the foundation of a society's operation, has been valued and triggered a heated discussion over whether the rules that communities today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. It is not surprising that some people, if not a majority, may therefore argue that the rule for the young today is not harsh. Contrary to these people\'s opinions is my perspective that society today requires young people strictly in the aspect of education and behavior.
Firstly, what must be prioritized is that society today have more education requirement for young people. With the development of the world, people have more access to a well-rounded education, leading to a growing population in the world equipped with diverse expertise. Therefore, without excellent education experience, young people will not be recognized by society. My brother\'s experience in job searching acts as a convincing example. For example, my brother was addicted to video games when he was in middle school, rendering a bad academic performance with a C grade in each subject. Without a doubt, he got rejected by all elite universities and studied in a low-ranked community college. He did not realize the importance of an educational background until he located a vocation in the job market. My brother found all the high-paid jobs required job hunters to graduate from a first-class university. In consequence, working as a deliveryman in DOORDASH and UBER EAT, the salary is low and unstable, leading to an unsatisfying life. Apparently, the necessary requirements for young people are the competence of multiple skills and a highly competitive education background. Therefore, we can contend that society exerts stringent rules on young people.
Furthermore, what is equally worth discussing is that society request people to behave appropriately and politely. Since social media quickly spreads information and news here and there, netizens and the public accordingly judge and comment on others people online. Take a Chinese influencer as an example. Lisa is a Chinese influencer with one million fans and lovers, famous for her beauty and exquisite makeup technique. Recently, a video posted on several net sides showed that she threw trash to the ground, leading to a widespread discussion. Most people criticized her unpolite behavior and boycotted all her advertisements and short videos as the public thought Lisa did not satisfy the basic code of conduct. Later on, she had to apologize and promised not to throw trash anymore; however, her flame would not return. Thus I am convinced that the rules that society expects young people to obey are more stringent, especially in the principle of polite conduct.
Admittedly, society has more tolerance for diverse characteristics and promote equality among different kind of people. For example, the public approves LGBT-related movies and books to publish. However, the general rules that societies hope young people obey are stricter than before in the aspect of education and conduction since the rapid progression of network technology allows people to focus more on young people\'s behavior and conduct. That is to say, the young in society today have more rigorous regulations to comply with.
To sum up, after a thorough analysis of the previously mentioned statement, I shall maintain that society today holds strict requirements and rules for young people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, kind of, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2881.0 1977.66487455 146% => OK
No of words: 540.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33518518519 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92010379487 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 212.727598566 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542592592593 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 915.3 618.680645161 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6398432179 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.703703704 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.40740740741 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251125460172 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672226785001 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798153206815 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169423159916 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863495508264 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 171.0 86.8835125448 197% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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