The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.(SAMPLE DOL)
The diagrams give information on the transformations which occurred in the British city of Felixstone between 1967 to 2001.
In general, it can be seen that the area has had many new facilities added, while others were removed.
Looking closely at the graph, there were a few major modifications. Firstly, farmland in the northeast of the city has been transformed into a residential area, complete with a hotel, swimming pool as well as two tennis courts. Meanwhile, the fish market on the other side of the road has also been replaced by a
private beach. Houses previously reserved for shops on the right of the high street have also now been replaced by apartments. In the southwest of the city, there have been four wind turbines installed, just below the dunes and right in front of the sea.
Next to the dunes, a new parking lot has been retrofitted to accompany the hotel that had already been built in 1967 - this, along with the adjacent coffeeshop,
remained unchanged. The Marina Pier that sat opposite the coffee shop in the same year had also been removed, with a public beach in its place. Lastly, the large golf course in the northwest of the city had not been altered.
- Some people think the qualities a person needs to become successful in today s world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced 79
- the diagram below shows the development of a particular area between 1965 and the present day 11
- The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the rate of violent crime in society Do you agree or diagree 74
- The diagram below shows the process of producing smoked fish 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ities added, while others were removed. Looking closely at the graph, there were...
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Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of the road has also been replaced by a private beach. Houses previously reserve...
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Line 4, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he dunes and right in front of the sea. Next to the dunes, a new parking lot has...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his, along with the adjacent coffeeshop, remained unchanged. The Marina Pier that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, so, well, while, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74879227053 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58826704464 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632850241546 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4722958843 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 5.23603664747 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0797669413812 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356124852494 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08306786725 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569009900753 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101032589009 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.