The following appeared in the summary of a study on headaches suffered by the
residents of Mentia.
"Salicylates are members of the same chemical family as aspirin, a medicine used
to treat headaches. Although many foods are naturally rich in salicylates, for the
past several decades, food-processing companies have also been adding salicylates
to foods as preservatives. This rise in the commercial use of salicylates has been
found to correlate with a steady decline in the average number of headaches
reported by participants in our twenty-year study. Recently, food-processing
companies have found that salicylates can also be used as flavor additives for
foods. With this new use for salicylates, we can expect a continued steady decline in
the number of headaches suffered by the average citizen of Mentia."
We are present with an argument that salicylates in the processing of food are making us have fewer headaches than usual, reducing the use of medication with salicylates. But we can not be sure that is the reason people it is not having a headache. We have a lot of others facts to consider about that affirmation.
So people may have fewer headaches because of the lifestyle that they have changed with, eating more healthily, drinking more water, doing exercises, all things that the doctors ask for us to do, so we can have a better life and with fewer diseases. If one of that many things said above, is something that people are doing, so we can not guarantee that what is making people with fewer headaches, just one change in your lifestyle can make a big difference in your body.
We also have to consider that the medication and the salicylates in the food processing are not the same things, on the food the quantities and the form of salicylates are different, they are like a flavor, so the food can taste the batter, and here they have another component and it is not pure like in the medication. So the efficiency of medication is high than salicylates that are in the processing food because that is the goal of the medication and no the goal of the food, so they can not be more effective than the medication, and can not prevent people from having headaches, and eating more that food can be dangerous for the body, causing something worst than a headache.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 266 350
No. of Characters: 1182 1500
No. of Different Words: 106 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.039 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.444 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.495 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 69 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 38 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.639 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.497 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.709 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.307 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... that is the goal of the medication and no the goal of the food, so they can not b...
^^
Line 5, column 663, Rule ID: WORST_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worse'?
Suggestion: worse
...ngerous for the body, causing something worst than a headache.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 55.5748502994 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 2260.96107784 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 266.0 441.139720559 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56390977444 5.12650576532 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60002565684 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 204.123752495 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424812030075 0.468620217663 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 705.55239521 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.8473053892 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.194668911 57.8364921388 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.428571429 119.503703932 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 23.324526521 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.70786347227 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110698317444 0.218282227539 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568860796778 0.0743258471296 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541776498218 0.0701772020484 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816637700295 0.128457276422 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340859112127 0.0628817314937 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 14.3799401198 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 48.3550499002 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.197005988 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 12.5979740519 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 98.500998004 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.1389221557 154% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.9071856287 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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