These days, some universities are currentional providing Internet-based courses as the alternatives for convention learning methods. This trend, in many case, should be more harmful.
First, online courses are delay and low quality learning. This is due to the fact that student, when there is no teacher supervision, would spend most of their time to work a part time job instead of learning Internet-based courses . For example, my friend, is learning to online courses of Ha Noi University, she always procrastinates online courses to go to work, this lead to her re-studying due to poor quality. If Internet-based courses not developed, people would learn more fully with traditional learning models.
Secound, since online courses must face to face interaction with computer for hours, lead to socially isolated and depression. This is the result of people would not do extracurricular activities, hand-on activities and practical skills when learning online. For example, my neighbor, during 8 months of online learning because of Covid, she suffered from depression.
In conclusion, we should learn traditional learning models instead of Internet-base courses to ensure quality and health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun case seems to be countable; consider using: 'many cases'.
Suggestion: many cases
...ention learning methods. This trend, in many case, should be more harmful. First, online...
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Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ould spend most of their time to work a part time job instead of learning Internet-based ...
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Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...stead of learning Internet-based courses . For example, my friend, is learning to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 182.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60989010989 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15157983131 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620879120879 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5368967732 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225015793846 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936608641328 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418906183512 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134039862726 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580146509191 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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