People who start a university course but do not complete it should be fined. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
There are some people who initiate a university course and are not able to finish it. Therefore, they should be punished. In my opinion, withdrawal from education should not include a fine.
It is my view that, the majority of people who attend in higher education are willing to work while they study so as to obtain the income source. It is undeniable fact that several people, particularly university students, who are responsible for their family run into financial issues. Since, they would find it difficult to continue university as the student to pay tuition fees and a heavy penalty, they could make decision to withdrawal from education. I, personally, know of a few friends who they faced lack of money and had to drop out of college after their first year. Then, they have dedicated their entirely time to make money in order to address the monetary issue.
In contrast, some people claim that gaining money from punished students who have not completed all terms brings about increasing the budget of universities. They also firmly insist that the colleges are able to invest punishment fees for boosting facilities and educational features. I do not find this argument convincing as the budget should be allocated by the government. From an educational viewpoint, governments have access into revenue sources to plan and develop more effectively services in educational centers such as universities.
In conclusion, l totally disagree with considering penalty for people who are not able to complete courses at university because a vast number of students provide financial support for their family members. Consequently, they are not allowed to pay extra money for leaving education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, so, then, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21090909091 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81315446013 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3712576463 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.357142857 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184185704785 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686040897539 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514457197146 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13360169822 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539943946272 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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