Dear Sir,
I hope your day is going great. According to the agreement we had regarding the job this summer, I'm writing to inform you that I'd no longer take the job because of some reasons.
My university would have their Student Union Government election during the summer. You remember the eight months ASUU strike that was just called off? It affected the previous date set for the Union's elections. As the head of the Electoral Monitoring Team, it's expedient that I m available to monitor the whole process. Campaigns will kick off on 4th August 2022 and we're are expecting the best outcome from this election.
In addition to the explanation above, I want to apologize for any disappointment this would cause your company. The chance have been created; I couldn't take the spot at the moment because my attention is needed elsewhere.
Finally, I'd love to work for your company next summer. If I get a second chance, then I will surely grace the opportunity of being your sales manager.
I hope to hear from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Adam Grant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, regarding, second, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87027027027 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56403170474 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708108108108 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8267822538 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3076923077 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206560817217 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592869412073 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600452042612 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110133572635 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634218148669 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.