As more and more people are taking alternative medicines and treatments by themselves, with my concern, it not a wise idea for them if they do not visite their usual doctor. I will adress my opinions as below.
Firstly, I admit that if people got sick just because of small illness, it is not necessary to visit a doctor and they can try some alternative medicines. When people got fever or cold, you can go to the CVS or other pharmaceutical stores to buy some pills and get cure yourself. Even some time you can treat yourself by relaxing driking more water. I think this is the most case when people got covid-19 nowadays, since this virus can not be removed from the earth like we can not overcome the cold or fevver forever.
Secondly, however, people can not always try to take alternative medicines or treatments without seeing their usual doctor. Still the covid-19 case, in the beginning of its outbreak in the year 2020, this high-contageous disease is not as simple as a common flu since it kills people. In another word, people got contacted can not get cured all by themselves. They need the right treatments by the doctors and equipments like ECMO which help them to breath. Moreover, the medicine to cure people got covid-19 like plaxivod as well as the vaccine like Moderna were not developed immediately. Thus people have to turn to the doctor for help. Moreover, there are lots of complicated illness with some trivial symptoms at the begnning like cancer. If you just treat it as a cold and by some pills at the drug store, the consequence will be adverse and dangerous.
Thirdly, it is true we can cure ourselves with some medicines or treatements, but how can we judge whether we need to see our usual doctor? It is not only an question I will answer but a living
philosophy I will adress. The most important thing for us is to live a healthy life instead of always preparing to take some pills or see the doctors, doing the gyms and eating healthy are significant for our body. Then, we need to take the body check at time to make sure our body is healthy from inside to the outside. At last, it is the judgement we need to take, in short, if you can not get better with your own treatment, do not hesitate and just go to see the doctor as quick as possible, since your body is asking professional help instead of your own experince.
In general, it is not advisable for people to try altenative medicines or treatments by themselves with out seeing their usual doctor. For some illness we can not get well all by ourselves, we need the right person, our doctor, to help us get cured.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...ents without seeing their usual doctor. Still the covid-19 case, in the beginning of ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...to see our usual doctor? It is not only an question I will answer but a living ph...
^^
Line 10, column 100, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...e medicines or treatments by themselves with out seeing their usual doctor. For some ill...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, even so, i think, in general, in short, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 473.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54122621564 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52775094242 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458773784355 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.556300165 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.285714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5238095238 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.04761904762 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257229594849 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839803597858 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876082816116 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150858451996 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583717140043 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...ents without seeing their usual doctor. Still the covid-19 case, in the beginning of ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...to see our usual doctor? It is not only an question I will answer but a living ph...
^^
Line 10, column 100, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...e medicines or treatments by themselves with out seeing their usual doctor. For some ill...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, even so, i think, in general, in short, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 473.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54122621564 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52775094242 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458773784355 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.556300165 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.285714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5238095238 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.04761904762 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257229594849 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839803597858 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876082816116 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150858451996 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583717140043 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.