Social media take away relationships?
Social media take away relationships?
This is the most dramatic question among people that say social media can take away relationships, if you mulled it over you would understand that every now and then it can affect some relationships but, sometimes not, follow these steps.
Firstly, social media is figurative relationships among most of the people that utilize it, social media (figurative virtual) can get people around face to face meeting, not only would their camaraderie situation hurt but also, they wouldn’t know them selves for prospective therefore, social media can change people’s treating, they wouldn’t be that best and brightest one that used to be every thing among them would be altered.
Secondly, social media can do bad things on people’s lives by the virtue of that, they wouldn’t do those things that used to do. for example, helping each others, have ever thought that why native people used to enhance each others that was what that the were richer and had affluent economic? Or, have you ever thought that why we are poor now(even don’t have that mean to pass our days)? Actually if we think about this all of these are related to our treatment and the issue that eliminate all the cores to inhibit this malicious situation is social media.
Thirdly, social media is making people hate their family day in and day out in their daily lives, occasionally, you would be caught off guard that why your parents don’t take care about you all of these come to social media, another hurt of social media. To my knowledge, all the time social media isn’t a bad thing, sometimes it can soothe you when you don’t pay much money to have the access to fans, sometimes it can help you that do every thing that you like in your life by figurative virtual, like: some online jobs, online studies(don’t pay a lot money to face to face classes), online working and etc. To be foolproof about your time and life, this is an outright thing that can so good things.
To recapitulate, try to cut off this dim this way to back of my idea get around this is reluctant situation this isn’t what is said by me this is according a quest, so social media isn’t amazing thing not bad thing(the less to use it the more would have time with your family), it should be used not too much.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 1.00243902439 1397% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 3.15609756098 570% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 65.0 5.60731707317 1159% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 965.302439024 200% => OK
No of words: 410.0 196.424390244 209% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70731707317 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 3.73543355544 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40403685877 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 106.607317073 189% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492682926829 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 283.868780488 205% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.519168865 43.030603864 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.454545455 112.824112599 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2727272727 22.9334400587 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320087315289 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188790090185 0.103423049105 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.27450582442 0.0843802449381 325% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301761618345 0.15604864568 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.319904007645 0.0819641961636 390% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 61.2550243902 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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