Social media take away relationships?
this is the most dramatic question among people that say social media can take away relationships, if you mulled it over you would understand that every now and then it can affect some relationships but, sometimes not, follow these steps.
Firstly, social media is figurative relationships among most of the people that utilize it, social media (figurative virtual) can get people around face to face meeting, not only would their camaraderie situation hurt but also, they wouldn’t know them selves for prospective therefore, social media can change people’s treating, they wouldn’t be that best and brightest one that used to be every thing among them would be altered.
Secondly, social media can do bad things on people’s lives by the virtue of that, they wouldn’t do those things that used to do. for example, helping each others, have ever thought that why native people used to enhance each others that was what that the were richer and had affluent economic? Or, have you ever thought that why we are poor now(even don’t have that mean to pass our days)? Actually if we think about this all of these are related to our treatment and the issue that eliminate all the cores to inhibit this malicious situation is social media.
Thirdly, social media is making people hate their family day in and day out in their daily lives, occasionally, you would be caught off guard that why your parents don’t take care about you all of these come to social media, another hurt of social media. To my knowledge, all the time social media isn’t a bad thing, sometimes it can soothe you when you don’t pay much money to have the access to fans, sometimes it can help you that do every thing that you like in your life by figurative virtual, like: some online jobs, online studies(don’t pay a lot money to face to face classes), online working and etc. To be foolproof about your time and life, this is an outright thing that can so good things.
To recapitulate, try to cut off this dim this way to back of my idea get around this is reluctant situation this isn’t what is said by me this is according a quest, so social media isn’t amazing thing not bad thing(the less to use it the more would have time with your family), it should be used not too much.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6925 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36922851367 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4925 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.1344086022 199% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.371339939 48.9658058833 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.7 100.406767564 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.6045352989 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 5.45110844103 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274149894081 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107669099203 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102479390359 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162113942014 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761409738626 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 11.7677419355 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.1575268817 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.002688172 290% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.0537634409 179% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.