Theseday , it is believed that coummunicating by speaking is better than writing . Athough , this idea is reasonable to some extent , I would argue that using letter or message is more comfortable .
• On the one hand , I am convinced that people should spend time writing letter or message. Firstly , Spoken communication can take a lot of time of people . When spoken communication is abused , people do not have time to work or study. For example, if I want to meet and talk to my friend , I have to spend many hours going to coffee shop and go back home .Secondly , people can easily save memory with written communication . When people communicate by writing letter or sending message , all of content of conversation are saved and everyone can watch them everytime. Example ,when I have free time but I can’t talk to my friend , I often read all of letter I used to receive from my relations.
• On the other hand , it is understandable why spoken communication is choosed by many people .On top of that , many people are usually lazy when using written communication. After busy hours at company , it is extremely tired if everyone have to use keyboard or pen to write message or letter . In fact , after I finishing my study at school , I really prefer to meet my friend at coffee shop to write message. Furthermore , Everyone would have more chance to meet each other if people use spoken communication so the relationship between me and my friends is more close .
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support people keeping in touch by calls or meeting, i strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
- The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024 67
- Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Many students spend hours a day using smartphones Why is this the case Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 84
- Many students spend hours a day using smartphones Why is this the case Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 56
- Some people believe that university students should pay for their tuition fees because university education only benefits students themselves not society as a whole To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77319587629 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81001646673 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529209621993 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7481962663 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168382102299 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719018248316 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691245230098 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896077791105 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537827198224 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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