These days , it is believed that communicate communication by speaking is more important than communicate by writing letters or messages . Although , this idea is reasonable to some extent , i would argue that people should use using written communication .
On the one hand , I ami am convinced that communication/ conversation/ interaction communicate by writing sending/ receiving letters or messages mails has some advantages . Firstly ,the content of the conversation can be saved/ store/ collect/ maintain easily by people . In my opinion , the letter or message which is written on paper or smartphones may be saved This has existed for a long time . Accordingly , people could to review their memory every time when they want ư . Secondly , people would not take much/ plenty of/many time to meet directly with each other . To be honest/ Honestly honestly , Ggoing out to the coffee shop where people meet hang out with their friends could take many hours . Therefore ,which makes the majority of people don not want to meet friends because they are so tired after a busy day .
On the other hand , it is understandable why most people choose to keep in touch by speaking . On top of that , i believed that meeting physical interaction inat the real life coffee shop where people could talk directly with each other is very enjoyable happy . The conversation gathering is more interesting/ fantastic/ fascinating because people have more opportunitiesy to show their emotions . Furthermore , people would avoid eye diseases disease about eyes which is caused by smartphones and . Cellphones are abusing the Internet ed could also cause many consequences such as d . For examplexamples : Low vision or blindness . In addition to , reducing time on smartphones could help users avoid phones addiction .
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support people keeping in touch by calls or meetings, I i strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, furthermore, honestly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2492211838 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97133924496 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588785046729 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.983449598 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1176470588 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121968901734 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418112470309 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836079329612 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101626463833 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131832232097 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.