Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems.
It is believed that to impede diseases and many kinds of health problems, governments should give attention to environmental issues and housing problems. While this statement might be true, I still agree with it.
On the one hand, environmental problems such as air pollution or water pollution, with the lack of houses could lead to many types of diseases. Citizens who live in dirty areas with lots of harmful bacteria and have to deal with the pollution that is caused by the increase in the number of vehicles might become the source of infection. For example, in some big cities in the world, like New Delhi, or Hanoi, there are many slums where poor people can not afford the living live. They have to lie on the streets, stay in unsanitary conditions, and may get some kind of illness that can spread to society. So it is important for governments to focus on the environment and housing problems.
On the other hand, governments can apply many ways to prevent illness and diseases. Reducing environmental pollution and housing problems are a few of the methods to solve the problems. For instance, many organizations have been set up by governments around the world, and they supply money for it to build more houses for people in need. Because the fewer poor people there are, the fewer diseases are created. Not only that, but governments can also supply money for the public transport systems or encourage them to buy new means of transport to prevent pollution.
To conclude, the more governments focus on environmental and housing problems, the fewer diseases and illnesses are created.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, still, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92250922509 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69336801936 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531365313653 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0704734242 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.615384615 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377967854449 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132202259708 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100628683306 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247784915253 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089928666185 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.