Government should pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that the government should offer free courses for everyone wanting to apply for a university. I completely agree with this point of view.
There are several disadvantages to abolishing tuition fees . Firstly, The government often has to pay a large amount of money on school facilities and school reconstruction if needed and it is taken from tuition fees, so cutting down every student’s course cost would definitely lead to financial problems. In my opinion, free college could also make students not value education. For example, a few students could feel a lack of motivation to study hard and because of not being forced to pay tuition, they might tend to easily accept studying again if they fail at the exam.
Despite having some drawbacks, I still think allowing everyone not to have to pay for tuition costs is necessary.Firstly, not everyone has a good financial condition to study at the university. These include people who are intelligent, have high academic results at their high school or have talent in a particular subject. So, paying for course fees is a great way for the governments to encourage them to follow their dream and they could also have a potential workforce in the future. secondly, tuition free would lead to an increase in the number of people attending to the university and it is cleared that having a high rate of graduated students means that the people’s intellectual level and the quality of education would be improved which the governments usually aim for
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00393700787 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85025478265 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594488188976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3523452106 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.1 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311104618123 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117525852816 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962391936924 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225943357549 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690470956918 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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