Rules and laws keep society stable. It cannot work if individuals are free to do whatever they want. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Why?
Following the development of civilization, rules and laws are being implemented to keep society stable and in order. Controversially, every single person ought to obey and follow the rules which cause citizens to lose their own freedom in some aspects. Further in this essay, I will discuss deeper into the complication as well as giving some relevant opinions on the matter.
First and foremost, rules and laws are obviously indispensable in the modern era as it prevents chaos and limits crimes. However, it is necessary for people to do things with their free will as long as it does not pose any threats to the communities or to the surrounding individuals. Not only can this encourage the creativity but it can also provide an easy-going environment for people to express their full capability and talent. Frankly speaking, these restrictions should only be developed at a certain level or limitation, it should not be too harsh and give people just enough freedom to show their best contribution to the society.
On the other hand, stability is the best policy to the development of a nation. It may be less accepted and strict to compel citizens to follow rules and laws but it can definitely bring a more sustainable system. With the balance of the community, everyone will have a positive condition to strongly do business and make a living. As a matter of fact, such implement comes with far fewer criminal rates, therefore, leading to a safer place for human to work without fear.
In conclusion, rules and laws are undeniably beneficial to a society due to the peace it could bring. Along with that, each and every individuals are required to believe in the government’s directs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...lose their own freedom in some aspects. Further in this essay, I will discuss deeper in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, frankly, however, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94055944056 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8840134994 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7682692157 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204330238805 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665039933727 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506224608453 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117331919734 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214787661388 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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