Dear Smith,
I am writing this letter to request a three-day leave. My best friend Jim will get married this Friday, I was asked to help him with the wedding ceremony this morning. In that it is Monday today, I would kindly like to get your permission ahead of time.
I am planing to move on Wednesday morning, hence I will arrive at that afternoon. Thursday will be busy for me and Jim since we need to prepare everything at the city hall where the wedding will be held. If everything goes fine on Friday, I will have a rest at my friend's home, then drive back on Saturday morning.
Besides, I would like to tell you my work can be done remotely this week. Maybe I will have no time to check my email on Thursday, but if there is new mission, please inform me on Wednesday or Friday, I will try my best to finish it before Sunday.
Thank you for your approval in advance, I am looking forward your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Tony
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, look, may, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38068181818 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31533219463 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8773019102 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17695956614 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804886437091 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678245990655 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12233968972 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759986676459 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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