Please explain, how your proposed studies at the University of Oxford are of relevance to the Muslim world.
My proposed study is directed towards cancer treatment. It is mainly regarding the synthesis and biological evaluation of cancer drugs that contain a specific character in their structure called the trimethoxypheny ring. These drugs have many side effects associated with their treatment. I am aiming to work on both increasing these drugs potency alongside decreasing its side effects be performing some structural changes.
It is known that several Muslim countries’ populations are suffering from cancer disease. In Egypt where I live, there is a whole hospital (57357 Hospital) that was built and currently dedicated for treating children suffering from cancer fully for free. Not only Egypt but also many other Muslim countries contain both children and adults who are suffering from cancer disease in addition to the serious side effects of the anticancer treatment they are receiving.
Since I was a child, it was my dream to study and work in the field of anticancer treatment. Therefore, I decided to work on cancer disease in my graduation project to become an effective person helping the Muslim world to overcome such a challenging disease. It would be a great step towards that goal of mine to continue my education and conduct a Master’s degree by research in Organic Chemistry at Oxford University.
I believe my study at Oxford University would allow me to complete my research regarding the discovery of novel anticancer drugs that have a great potency and less side effects on the cancer patients.
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- The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comaparisons where relevant 73
- Internet helps student better than teacher in learning class especially for children What extend to agree and disagree to this statement 73
- Please explain how your proposed studies at the University of Oxford are of relevance to the Muslim world 56
- Describe the presented chart 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23265306122 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83039962122 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555102040816 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.349850427 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.545454545 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115702627564 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472916451605 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456357551329 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766951037829 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422963483619 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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